2011年9月6日 星期二
Family Background
My name is Chia Ying Lin. I was born in a 5-member family with a harmonious atmosphere. My father is the person who is so truthful that his action is in accord with his words. Therefore, I admire and respect him very much. He always tells me to be an honest people, not to deceive others except for white lies. My mother,unlike others', is a housewife who does housework diligently everyday without complaining. From her behavior, I learn that doing things with diligence is significant even though it's just an comon, ordinary "brick". When I face some challenges, they also encourage me not to look upon everything as predicaments. There must exist another way for me to look for.
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第七行後面it's just "an "comon, ordinary "brick".=>a
回覆刪除My mother,unlike others', is a housewife who does housework diligently everyday without complaining.=>unlike others'感覺有點怪 因為別人的母親有哪裡跟你媽不一樣嗎??是職業還是??=)
其他的我覺得都可以~
brick是什麼意思啊看不太懂>_<
回覆刪除感覺還沒打完耶
你最後最好在加一些你學到了什麼的小總結喔:)
From her behavior, I learn that doing things with diligence is significant even though it's just an comon, ordinary "brick".
回覆刪除-是要寫common嗎??
There must exist another way for me to look for.
結束的有點匆促喔 ~
My mother,unlike others', is a housewife who does housework diligently everyday without complaining
回覆刪除→意思是因為你媽不會抱怨,別人的媽媽都會抱怨,所以很特別?!XD~
From her behavior, I learn that doing things with diligence is significant even though it's just an comon, ordinary "brick".
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comon→common
這句我看不太懂,即使是"磚塊"??
可以改一下!!!