2011年9月6日 星期二

Family Background

  My name is Chia Ying Lin. I was born in a 5-member family with a harmonious atmosphere.  My father is the person who is so truthful that his action is in accord with his words. Therefore, I admire and respect him very much.  He always tells me to be an honest people, not to deceive others except for white lies.  My mother,unlike others',  is a housewife who does housework diligently everyday without complaining.  From her behavior, I learn that doing things with diligence is significant even though it's just an comon, ordinary "brick".  When I face some challenges, they also encourage me not to look upon everything as  predicaments.  There must exist another way for me to look for. 

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  1. 第七行後面it's just "an "comon, ordinary "brick".=>a
    My mother,unlike others', is a housewife who does housework diligently everyday without complaining.=>unlike others'感覺有點怪 因為別人的母親有哪裡跟你媽不一樣嗎??是職業還是??=)
    其他的我覺得都可以~

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  2. brick是什麼意思啊看不太懂>_<

    感覺還沒打完耶
    你最後最好在加一些你學到了什麼的小總結喔:)

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  3. From her behavior, I learn that doing things with diligence is significant even though it's just an comon, ordinary "brick".
    -是要寫common嗎??

    There must exist another way for me to look for.
    結束的有點匆促喔 ~

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  4. My mother,unlike others', is a housewife who does housework diligently everyday without complaining
    →意思是因為你媽不會抱怨,別人的媽媽都會抱怨,所以很特別?!XD~
    From her behavior, I learn that doing things with diligence is significant even though it's just an comon, ordinary "brick".

    comon→common
    這句我看不太懂,即使是"磚塊"??
    可以改一下!!!

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