2011年10月18日 星期二

Future Perspectives

  After my graduation, I will like to be admitted to my idal university, National Kaohsiung First University of Science and Technology.  I will choose English as my major since I don't want to stop sharpening my English ability.  Thus, I will spare no efforts to develop it so as to be a useful person  in the future.   I'd like to be an interpreter who is capable of communicating with others. Learning English really does me good because it can help me broaden my horizon toward future such as learning new knowledge of different countries.  Therefore, I have to strengthen my skills of languages so that I will accomplishment my dream in the future.  With an eye to advancing my English abilities in all aspects, I sincerely hope that I can be admitted to your university.  Besides studying, I 'll also try to practice my guitar-playing skills in attempt to compose music to enrich my life.

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  1. Therefore, I have to strengthen my skills of languages so that I will accomplishment my dream in the future. =>accomplish(V.)
    最後那一句 Besides studying, I 'll also try to practice my guitar-playing skills in attempt to compose music to enrich my life. 我覺得不像結尾句~可以的話再加一句小結論我覺得會比較好
    比起前篇的熱血~我覺得這篇就是走理性風^^不過都很棒ˇ

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  2. 加油喔! 日語英語都精通真的很棒 :>
    寫的很好

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  3. After my graduation, I will like to be admitted to my idal university, ...
    idal→ideal

    恩恩~
    廣闊的未來~
    可是我覺得結尾不要放吉他學習,
    如果要放,
    我覺得應該要加一句,
    "使我的生活更加的精采"

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