I am a girl who is interested in languages because of my curiosity about laguages. Besides English, I'm also interested in Japanese. How amazing it is that everything could be expressed by the 50 letters in the alphabet! Though my major is English, I also learn Japanese abilities by myself. As long as I finish preparing schoolwork, I will move on to Japanese books,magazines,and so on. In addition to reading some Japanese articles, I listen to the Japanese rock and pop songs which are made by visual bands as well. (Being) Accurate to say, their music is so attractive that it arouse my fancy to Japanese. Inspired by ther dedication to composing melody, I know that the attitude, which is just as same as learning a language. Their spirit really has a big influence on me and it changes me a lot. Deeply influenced by them, I do my best to learn English and Japanese well in order to make my dream more attainable.
In addition, I love playing the guitar,too. Though now I don't have time to sharpen my guitar-playing skills, my affection for it dosen't change. I will practice it after Joint College Entrance Examination terminate.
There are two mottos which I like very much. One is" Honesty is the best policy." And the other is" Nothing is more beautiful than a devoted person." My father always tells me that treating people and everything with honesty is significant so that I can have a clear conscience in my life. As for the latter, I learned the sense from my favorite band, SID. It's the band which enlightens me a lot. Both them have great impacts on me.
我覺得你的文章架構很清楚~
回覆刪除尤其是講日文的那一段~great=))
我也都是這麼想的~哈哈~
文法的錯誤我覺得還好~
畢竟文章要吸引人才是重要的~
而且我也的確可以從你的敘述中感受到你對日文的熱情喔~that is enough^^b
寫的很好!
回覆刪除看的出來你真的很喜歡日語
想到你之前說被騙來就覺得很好笑XD
第一行的laguages→languages
回覆刪除Accurate to say, their music is so attractive that it arouse my fancy to Japanese.
arouse→arouses
Inspired by ther dedication to composing melody,...
ther→their
Though now I don't have time to sharpen my guitar-playing skills, my affection for it dosen't change.
dosen't→doesn’t
都是很小的錯誤拉~
哇~
你完全把你的愛好融合進去耶,
我也想這樣寫~
可是我不會韓文~XD~
...為什麼最後是未完阿??