Descriping a person-revised

 When my good friend and I took a trip to Tokyo Dome for concerts in Japan, she was missing.  With the descriptions of her appearance below, I hope everyone can help me find her as soon as possible. Kayla, the name of my friend, who has black straight long hair,dressed in a yellow T- shirt, pink miniskirt and a pair of red shoes when the last time I saw her.  She wears glasses and has a sweet smile on her face all the time.  Moreover, the color of  her eyes are deep brown, which is the color Taiwanese's eyes. Besides, she is medium height and slender.  Please call my if you find her and my number is 0911001101.  I will appreciate your favor.

Comparing-2

  Today, I'm going to introduce you two historic celebrities.  One is John Adams and the other is Thomas Jefferson.  They are alike in many ways.  For instance, John Adams was an important person in the American Revolution.  Likewise, Thomas Jefferson also played an important part in that revolution.  Besides, John Adams studied and practiced law.  Similarly,  Thomas Jefferson studied and practiced law.  With their excellent behaviours, both John and Thomas were delegates to the Continental Congress.  Moreover, John Adams was the signer of Declaration of Independence, and so did Thomas Jefferson.  They were also alike in being U.S. president.  Furthermore,  they both died on July 4th in 1826s .What a coincidence!  John Adams made history because of his glories.  Similarly, Thomas Jefferson made history because of his glories.

In memory of their epic achievement,  the residence in U.S. built monuments for them.

Comparing-1

A police officer needs to examine two women's driving licenses.  He finds that the two women are alike in several ways.  To begin with, both Stephanie Brooks and Ann Friedman are in the same department of Motor Vehicles.  The color of Stephanie's eyes are brown and the color of her hair is black.  The color of Ann's eyes and hair are similar to that of Stephanie's.  Moreover, Stephanie was born on July  31th in 1970s, and so did Ann.  What makes the police officer feel surprised is that they also alike in their height!  The police haven't met such a coincidence before so it impresses him very much.

Describing a Process-(How to study for an exam)-revised

  Taking exams is an inevitable thing which makes students dizzy and even frustrated.  Notwithstanding,  some students still have a good way to prepare for it.  There are some good ways to study well below.  First of all, preview the courses you are going to take tomorrow so that you will have concepts previously when the teachers are teaching.  Secondly, do the assighments which are given by the teachers on time and ask teachers questions if you encounter some difficulties.  Thirdly, make sure that you have already figured out the questions and reviewed all the important concepts before the quizes and exams.  After all,  review can make you more impressive.  Last but not the least,  don't think preparing for the exams is such a miserable thing.  By this way, you can not only test your ability but also progress a lot from it.

Giving reason-(Why is English Important?)

English is important for being a international language.  Firstly, it is spoken by many people all over the world, so if we go to another countries but don't know how to speak local tongue, we can use it to communicate with others.  Secondly, learning English can help us find a good job such as tour guide in the future.  As a tour guide, I can travel around the world.  Third, learning English can improve my English ability.  With the ability, I can talk to foreigners in confidence.  To sum up, English is a helpful tongue which can lead me to cath up an international earth verage.  By learning English, the distance from country to country is no longer a problem.

Descriping a person

  When my good friend and I took a trip to Tokyo Dome in Japan, she was missing.  With the descriptions of her appearance below, I hope everyone could help me find her as soon as possible.  The name of my friend, Kayla, who has black straight long hair,dressed in a yellow T- shirt, pink miniskirt and a pair of red shoes when I last saw her.  She wears glasses and has a sweet smile on her face all the time.  And the color her eyes is deep brown.  That's the color of Taiwanese people's eyes.  Besides, she is medium height and slender.  Please call this number if anyone find her. 0911001101.  I will appreciate your favor.

Describing a Process-(How to study for an exam)

  Taking exams is an inevitable thing which makes students dizzy and even frustrated.  Notwithstanding,  some of students still have a good way to prepare for it.  Let's share how they do it.  First of all, preveiw the courses you are going to take tomorrow so that you will have concepts previously when the teachers is teaching.  Secondly, do the assighments which is given by the teachers on time and ask questions if you have encountered some difficult questions.  Thirdly, make sure that you have already figure out the questions and rewiew all the important concepts before the quizs and exams.  Review can make us more impressive.  Last but not the least,  don't think preparing for the exams is such a miserable thing.  By this way, you can not only test your ability but also progress a lot from it.