Self-Evaluation

  I am a girl who is interested in languages because of my curiosity about laguages.  Besides English, I'm also interested in Japanese.  How amazing it is that everything could be expressed by the 50 letters in the alphabet!  Though my major is English, I also learn  Japanese abilities by myself.  As long as I finish preparing schoolwork, I will move on to Japanese books,magazines,and so on.  In addition to reading some Japanese articles, I listen to the Japanese rock and pop songs which are made by visual bands as well.   (Being) Accurate to say, their music is so attractive that it arouse my fancy to Japanese.  Inspired by ther dedication to composing melody, I know that the attitude, which is just as same as learning a language.  Their spirit really has a big influence on me and it changes me a lot. Deeply influenced by them, I do my best to learn English and Japanese well in order to make my dream more attainable.
  In addition, I love playing the guitar,too.  Though now I don't have time to sharpen my guitar-playing skills, my affection for it dosen't change.  I will practice it after Joint College Entrance Examination terminate.
  There are two mottos which I like very much.  One is" Honesty is the best policy."  And the other is" Nothing is more beautiful than a devoted person."  My father always tells me that treating people and everything with honesty is significant so that I can have a clear conscience in my life.  As for the latter, I learned the sense from my favorite band, SID.  It's the band which enlightens me a lot.  Both them have great impacts on me.

School life-revised

  I am studing at Department of Applied Foreign Languages in National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School (NTCVS).  There are two reasons why I study at AFLA.  Since I was in junior high, I has been so interested in English that I always done well on English tests.  Moreover, I also have a deep curiosity in learning Japanese as I am fond of Japan.  Hence, I chose AFLA as my major.  In  order to strengthen my languistic abilities, not only does I study the textbooks but also read magazines.  I believe that the more I read, the better reading ability and the more vocabulary I will achieve.  Furthermore, I also listen to English, Japanese songs and watch English, Japanese movies as my amusements so that I can enhance my listening ability .   Every now and then, I practice English dialogues with my classmates during the class.  I really enjoy learning with classmates every day and be content with such an effective environment.  To my delight, my efforts paid off. I got the Intermediate-level Certificate of General English Proficiency Test afterward.
  Besides taking lessons in knowledge from school, I have also learned the notion that "being ministrant to others is important" as I acted as a practicing training leader.  Although it was laborious to help submit everyone's application form and a huge amount of registration fee to school, I still did my best and served everyone with enthusiasm.  Whenever I served my classmates, I would receive a sense of achievement.  It was a particular experience for me.  
 Besides studying, I also participated in a Talent Competition hold by school with my several classmates.  We decided to show our accomplishments by dancing.  In order to catch others' eyes, we devoted ourselves to practicing it untill we were content with it.  Though we didn't got a good grade eventually, our attitude toward dancing was respect by judges and our teacher.  To us, this was the best reward.  This Talent Competition had become one of my memorable things in my life.
  In NTCVS, I can not only strengthen my languisic skills, but also be capable of broadening my horizons.

Family Background -revised

  My name is Chia Ying Lin, who used to be a shy girl.  But with the time passing away, I gradually overcome my shyness.  I was born in a 5-member family with a harmonious atmosphere.  My father is the person who is so truthful that his action is in accord with his words. Therefore, I admire and respect him very much.  He always tells me to be an honest people, not to deceive others except for white lies.  Hence, I attribute my honesty to my father's teaching.  My mother, a housewife, who does housework diligently everyday without complaining.  From her behavior, I learn that doing things with diligence is significant even though it's just a comon, ordinary thing.  So, I have to do my best to complete everything with my efforts lest I feel ashamed of her expectation.  I really learn a lot from them.  In addition, they also inspirit me when I face some challenges, they encourage me not to look upon everything as predicaments. “There must exist another way for me to look for,” said my parents.

School life

  I am studing at Department of Applied Foreign Languages in National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School (NTCVS).  There are two reason  for my studying at AFLA.  Since I was in junior high, I has been so interested in English that I always done well on English tests.  Moreover, I also have a deep curiosity in learning Japanese as I am fond of Japan.  Hence, I chose AFLA as my major.  In  order to strengthen my languistic abilities, not only does I study the textbooks but also read magazines.  I believe that the more I read, the better reading ability and the more vocabulary I will achieve.  Furthermore, I also listen to English, Japanese songs and watch English, Japanese movies as my amusements so that I can enhance my listening ability .   Every now and then, I practice English dialogues with my classmates while in the class.  I really enjoy learning with classmates every day and be content with such an effective environment.  To my delight, my efforts pays off. I get the Intermediate-level Certificate of General English Proficiency Test afterward.  
  Besides taking lessons in knowledge from school, I have also learned the notion that "being ministrant to others is important" as I acted as a practicing training leader.  Although it was laborious to help submit everyone's application form and a huge amount of registration fee to school, I still did my best and served everyone with enthusiasm.  Whenever I served my classmates, I would receive a sense of achievement.  It was a particular experience for me.  In NTCVS, I can not only strengthen my languisic skills but also be capable of broadening my horizons.

Family Background

  My name is Chia Ying Lin. I was born in a 5-member family with a harmonious atmosphere.  My father is the person who is so truthful that his action is in accord with his words. Therefore, I admire and respect him very much.  He always tells me to be an honest people, not to deceive others except for white lies.  My mother,unlike others',  is a housewife who does housework diligently everyday without complaining.  From her behavior, I learn that doing things with diligence is significant even though it's just an comon, ordinary "brick".  When I face some challenges, they also encourage me not to look upon everything as  predicaments.  There must exist another way for me to look for. 

autobiography-sample two

  I am Mark Huang, a second-year senior high school student. I am seventeen-year-old. I am from a well-to-do family. I am the eldest child of three. My father and mother run a trading company; my younger sister is in junior high school and our baby brother goes to elementary school. Since I am the eldest child, it makes me an independent, responsible and mature person.
I have great interests in computer. I have played with computer for almost seven years. My computer skill is superb. My friends always come to me for their computer problems.
I know how to set up a website and make flash animations. Currently I have my own website sharing my habits and interests with people around the world. My website is mainly about topics of computer, basketball and movies. I also make lots of funny flash cartoons on basketball.
I have met many web friends from many countries. We exchange information, ideas, school lives and academic problems. We have to communicate with one another in English, thus after these years of practicing English, it certainly helps me a lot in English and I become the top student in English course. Not to mention I am already the No.1 student in computer field.
In order to prepare myself for the E-era and be able to apple my interest and specialty into the workplace, I decide to major in computer science to enhance my computer skill and knowledge and learn how to design programs that will bring people efficiency and convenience in the 21st century.
With my computer and English ability, I am confident in myself to do well in computer field. Wish you could give me a chance to prove it. I am eager to be one of programmer who helps our society to do development and research on information and technology in this cutting edge.

轉貼自:http://blog.yam.com/meson/article/28245113

autobiography-sample one

  My name is Fang. I am now 17 years old. I have an English name called Matthew. I am studying in a private high school. There are five people in my family officer and my mother is a housewife. Both of my younger brother and sister are studying in junior high school. You might think that my family is a traditional and stern one because of my father. However, it’s the opposite. My father is an open-minded person full of sense of humor. I must say I am lucky to have such a happy family.
My father certainly have great influence on me, I always look up to him. His passion and dedication to his job and family are the best things us. He never forces us to do anything we don’t like. He gives us freedom of choice. That’s why I can join so many school activities and have the chance to develop my hobbies.
I have been very active. I am one of the computer freaks who just can’t take my eyes away from the computer screen. My friends know I am good in computer, so as their computers have troubles, they would come to me. I am also a picture in school baseball team. Our team has won many, many matches thus we gained an honorable title of ”unbeatable” team “I believe this is resulted from our constant practice, hard work and our strong team spirit.
Although computer and baseball take up most of my leisure time, I manage to use some spare time to play electronic guitar in a band. I use computer to make a lot of our songs into MIDI flies and send them forward to many friends. My friends love them and think it’s awesome. To be able to combine my knowledge of computer and music is my proudest thing. Don’t get me wrong. I didn’t neglect my study. Unless my grades in school is OK, otherwise my parents won’t let me go all these.
I have been interested in computer since I was an elementary school student. That was the time Father had this big computer on his desk. Every time I was father’s absorbed face while using the computer, I developed this kind of admiration to it. I said to myself “I want to be like that one day.”
I liked to play around with my dad’s computer. One day I accidentally deleted one of my dad’s important files, I was very scared that my father would be furious with me. However it was not the case, my father gave me a gift instead of punishment. I was so surprised. Guess what? Yes, I got anew computer. Ever since then I have been addicted to computers, especially after the emerging of the Internet. Surfing the net has been one of my greatest hobbies.
The e-Commerce has changed our traditional form of life style. Take myself for example: I keep in touch with my friends through e-mail: I send my greetings through e-card; I buy books from e-book; I shop from many websites and I search information from the search engines.
Not to mention the importance of the e-era has brought most powerful reform to the business world banks and stock markets do transaction through the net, business direct transaction through the net, he space and time limitation no longer exist. I am fascinated to the new change and eager to take part in it. So I have decided to study in Computer and Information Science. I want to be a professional computer programmer who creates and designs the software to meet the needs of people in e-ear.

轉貼自:http://blog.yam.com/meson/article/28245113