Discussing Cause-1-REVISED

   I would like to move to another country, especially Japan.  There are several reasons below.  Firstly,  I would like to move to Japan to learn Japanese culture.  Besides, I 'm interested in Japanese kimonos,which have a lot of styles, appealing to me.  Secondly, I'd like to go to my favorite rock bands' concerts.  It will be convenient for me to go to their concerts if I move to Japan.  So I don't have to buy expensive airplane tickets.  Thirdly, I also have an interest in learning Japanese.  In order to master Japanese and get used to their accent as soon as possible,  I think living there is the best choice.  It goes without saying that the fatest way to learn a language is to live there.  Furthermore, people in Japan are patient and have high living quality, which cause me want to move there.  Due to all of these reasons, one must conclude that moving to Japan is really fascinating for me.