2011年6月8日 星期三

Discussing Effects-1-Effects of too much caffeine

  Do you drink coffee or tea to stay waking?  Both of them contain coffeine which can sober people up.  According to  the report, drinking a moderate amount of caffeine can help you concentrate your attention on what you are doing in short time.  Nevertheless, drinking too much caffeine may cause bad influence on your health.  Doctors point out that heavy caffeine use is more than 500 to 600 mg a day (four to seven cups of coffee).  There are serious effects of too much caffeine below:  Firstly, don't drink too much coffee or tea before you go to bed; otherwise, you may suffer from an insomnia which keep you wakeful till next morning.  On account of bad sleeping quality for a long period, you will get nervous and anxious easily when you are going to do something important such as giving a speech, having a meeting or test.  Worst of all, you may get  headaches regularly.  Futhermore,  don't drink too much coffee or tea when you are on a empty stomach, it may do harm to your stomach and even result in nausea or other gastrointestinal problems.  Besides, drinking too much coffee may lead to not only muscle tremors that will keep you from holding something steady, but fast or irregular heartbeat that will make you be short of breath. Though the effects of drinking caffeine or tea are not always negative, you need to control yourself when you are going to buy cups of coffee or tea.  Thus, only you pay attention to the amount of caffeine can you enjoy the benefits what it brings to you.  Due to all the above-mentioned facts, it is obvious that drinking too mush caffeine isn't good for health.

8 則留言:

  1. Do you drink coffee or tea to stay waking? =>~我覺得to stay awake比較好~
    sober one's up~原來醒酒是這樣用阿=))

    Both of them contain coffeine which can sober people up. According to the report, drinking a moderate amount of caffeine can help you concentrate your attention on what you are doing in short time. 這一段其實我不確定要不要耶~因為其實要寫就直接寫好或是不好~突然轉換立場會有點突兀~雖然你可能想把他們當作鋪陳~但我還是覺得不恰當~

    Futhermore, don't drink too much coffee or tea when you are on a empty stomach=>empty前面是用an
    Though the effects of drinking caffeine or tea are not always negative, you need to control yourself when you are going to buy cups of coffee or tea. =>應該是喝coffee而不是caffeine吧~應該沒有人在直接喝吧~buy cups of them.

    我覺得論點有調理~很好=))

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  2. stay awake 會不會比較好呢? 因為stay 後面是+ adj.

    Due to all the above-mentioned facts, it is obvious that drinking too mush caffeine isn't good for health.
    一樣Due to all the above-mentioned
    facts( effects會不會比較切題呢? :D )

    這篇文章整篇切合主題,寫的又很棒:D

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  3. On account of bad sleeping quality for a long period, you will get nervous and anxious easily when you are going to do something important such as giving a speech, having a meeting or test.
    這邊可以分成兩句~
    On account of bad sleeping quality for a long period, you will get nervous and anxious easily. Besides, when you are going to do something important such as giving a speech, having a meeting or test, you will failed on them.

    drinking caffeine好奇怪><
    可以改成攝取咖啡因或是喝咖啡=)

    這篇寫的十分豐富喔~

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  4. to stay waking // to stay awake
    too much 表過量可以用 heavy 等字替換
    10th Worst of all, you may get headaches regularly
    // regularly 比較偏向有規則,規律地 可以用off and on 或是irregularly
    8th or other gastrointestinal problems// problems -> discomfort

    其他的都還好喽XD

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  5. 第三行 drinking too much caffeine 咖啡因用喝的? 改成"攝取"比較好喔

    第七行 suffer from an insomnia which keep you...
    是keeps

    倒數第二行 the benefits what it brings to you 是which吧~~

    其他的就沒什麼錯誤了XDD

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  6. stay waking?-->stay awake?

    an insomnia which keep you
    -->an insomnia which keeps you

    哇~寫得很長又很有道理~

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  7. Do you drink coffee or tea to stay waking?
    >>>開頭很讚

    很有調理喔::>

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  8. Do you drink coffee or tea to stay waking?
    >> Do you drink coffee or tea to stay awake?

    drinking a moderate amount of caffeine
    這句話的文意很奇怪
    應該是說喝coffee不是喝咖啡因..

    an insomnia which keep you wakeful
    >>an insomnia which keeps you wakeful

    Futhermore, don't drink too much coffee
    >>Therefore, ~

    整篇文章敘述的很清楚
    讓人可以一目了然咖啡帶來的影響
    很像專業的report喔:)

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