Expressing an opinion-2

  I am on the same page as those who oppose the death penalty.  Firstly, using the death penalty can frighten people to commit crimes.  It can rid society of menaces.  In contrast, if the convict is released from the prison, they may do harm to society again.  Secondly, it protect humans beings from danger.  Only executing death penalty can console people's heart.  Thirdly,using the death penalty makes criminals pay the ultimate price.  In this way, it's fair to those victims' family.  Because of these facts, it is self-evident that using the death penalty is the best way to deter people from committing crimes.

Expressing an Opinion-1

 Despite the fact that wearing casual clothes is freer than wearing uniforms.  I feel that wearing uniforms is more convenient.  There are several reasons below why I support wearing uniforms.  To begin with, if something happens like a car accident, the police can know the identities of the students immediately judging by their uniforms so that the police can inform  their families right away.  In contrast, if the students wear casual clothes instead of uniforms, the police may take great pains to investigate the students' identities.  Secondly, students don't have to think over what clothes to put on every morning.  They needn't think which clothes they had already worn.  They just need to dress themselves in uniforms,  Wearing uniforms can save a lot of time.  Thirdly, if students of the same school all wear casual clothes, the scene will be disorderly, while the scene of wearing uniforms seems orderly.  Besides, wearing uniforms may make students feel that they are belong to the school.  Due to all of these reasons, one must conclude that wearing uniforms is a good choice.

Comparing-2 -revised

  Today, I'm going to introduce you two historic celebrities.  One is John Adams and the other is Thomas Jefferson.  They are alike in many ways.  For instance, John Adams was an important person in the American Revolution.  Likewise, Thomas Jefferson also played an important part in that revolution.  Besides, John Adams was similar to Thomas Jefferson, both them studied and practiced law.  With their excellent behaviour, both John and Thomas were the delegates of the Continental Congress.  Moreover, John Adams was the signer of Declaration of Independence, and so was Thomas Jefferson.  They were both alike in being U.S. president.  Furthermore,  they both died on July 4th in 1826s .What a coincidence!  John Adams made history because of his glories.  Similarly, Thomas Jefferson made history because of his glories.

In memory of their epic achievements,  the resident in U.S. built monuments for them.

Comparing-1-revised

  A police officer needs to examine two women's driving licenses on account of that both of them run through the red light in the same time.  He finds that the two women are alike in several ways.  To begin with, both Stephanie Brooks and Ann Friedman are in the same department of Motor Vehicles.  Besides, the color of Stephanie's eyes is brown and the color of her hair is black.  The color of Ann's eyes and hair are similar to those of Stephanie's.  Moreover, Stephanie was born on July  31th in 1970s, and so was Ann.  What makes the police officer feel surprised is that they also alike in their height!  The police hasn't met such a coincidence before, so it impresses him very much.

Contrasing-2

  Our company are looking for a talented instructor at English.  To our surprise, there are two people who meet our expectations.   Considered to their specialties below, We have to choose the one who fits the job best. Firstly, Debra Fines has more education than Lynn.  He  has studied in several schools and got many diplomas while Lynn Whitnall has only one diploma from New York University.  Secondly,  Debra's employment experience is senior to Lynn's.  He has changed many positions and  is well-experienced.  In addition, Debra also had English Verb Tenses published by Shortman Publishing Company in 2006.  From the several points above, Debra does be an excellent person for us to choose.  But we also reflect over Lynn's language skills.  When it comes to speaking languages, she is second to none.  Lynn is fluent in several languages such as Spanish, French and Japanese, whereas Debra is only fluent in French.  We think that she can be good at speaking English, too.  Moreover, she is excellent in teaching so that she got an award in 2004.  After thinking twice, we decide to hire Lynn Whitnal as our English instructor because we are lack of a gifted person who is good at speaking languages.

Contrasing-1

  My friend and I are looking for an apartment to share near campus.  Fortunately, we find two apartments which can meet our expectations right away.  Both them are in acceptable price and near the campus.  To begin with, considered to its soft, I prefer two large bedrooms in Fairfax Apartments on account of that we don't have to share a room and we can have more personal space.  In contrast, CAMPUS APTS has only one bedroom.  Secondly, Fairfax Apartments is furnished, whereas CAMPUS APTS is unfurnished.  I think it's not convenient to move into CAMPUS APTS without furniture because of having to spend lots of money on buying those daily supplies.  Moreover, Fairfax Apartments has an air condition while CAMPUS APTS doesn't.  We can use it to be more comfortable when Summer comes.  However, we need to pay 1250 dollars per month for Fairfax Apartments , while we only need to pay 900 dollars per month for CAMPUS APTS.  Although the rent of Fairfax Apartments is more expensive than CAMPUS APTS, I believe it will be paid off.  So we would like to rent Fairfax Apartments.

Comparing-3 (two people I know)

  Since junior high, I have been interested in listening to visual bands' music.  Out of my passion, I decide to introduce two excellent bassists from two popular bands in Japan.  One is Aki and the other is Iv.  To begin with, both them play in visual bands and become famous super idols in Japan.  They are popular with teenagers.  Secondly, Aki is as talented as Iv, they devote themselves to creating music on their own for their bands.  As long as they have inspiration, they write on their scores.  That's why they create a lot of touching melody which always appeals to public.  Thirdly, Aki and Iv are alike in the same habits.  Aki is used to going to Fitness Center for developing his muscles.  Similarly, Iv is used to going to Fitness Center for keeping himself in keeping in a good shape.  Moreover, Aki is as humorous as Iv.  Both them are interesting while they are in talk shows.  Their behaviors always catch others' attention.  To sum up, they are alike in many ways especially speaking to music.

Giving reason - (Why is English important?)-revised

  English is important for its being an international language.  People all over the world are speaking English. Why does English become so significant?  Here are some reasons below.  Firstly, by virtue of its being spoken by legions of people around the world, we can go to another country without difficulties because we don’t have the problem of not knowing local tongues.  We can communicate with locals by speaking English fluently.  Secondly, learning English can help us find a good job such as a tour guide for the foreseeable future.  As a tour guide, we can travel around the world to enrich our perceptions of life and learn other countries’ civilizations.  By traveling, we can have a great valuable opportunity to experience cultural exchange.  Thirdly, learning English can help us jump on the bandwagon instead of being one step behind others.  We can catch up the world and know the latest knowledge by translating English into Chinese.  In short, the distance from country to country is no longer a problem as long as we keep learning it.