Comparing-2 -revised

  Today, I'm going to introduce you two historic celebrities.  One is John Adams and the other is Thomas Jefferson.  They are alike in many ways.  For instance, John Adams was an important person in the American Revolution.  Likewise, Thomas Jefferson also played an important part in that revolution.  Besides, John Adams was similar to Thomas Jefferson, both them studied and practiced law.  With their excellent behaviour, both John and Thomas were the delegates of the Continental Congress.  Moreover, John Adams was the signer of Declaration of Independence, and so was Thomas Jefferson.  They were both alike in being U.S. president.  Furthermore,  they both died on July 4th in 1826s .What a coincidence!  John Adams made history because of his glories.  Similarly, Thomas Jefferson made history because of his glories.

In memory of their epic achievements,  the resident in U.S. built monuments for them.